Thursday, October 4, 2012

Eradication


            As the celebration in the mead hall continued, there was a certain excitment, or contentment—I couldn’t quite tell which—about the air, that I could not help my feeling uneasy about. I knew Grendel was coming, but I was not sure that Beowulf, the Geat, was actually the man he claimed to be. The stories were all well and good, but I saw no proof of his greatness. So, as the time grew nearer to midnight, I began to feel more anxious. As Beowulf and Unferth argued through their petty squabble, no one seemed to pay any mind to the fact that many fine, strong men’s lives were potentially going to be spent. Our fine new queen, Wealtheow, poured mead into my good kinsmen’s cups, and the entire hall carried on in their festivities. I glanced around the room and saw Unferth, the weak man that he was, struggling to hold back his tears as he stormed out of the hall. Our king, Hrothgar, speaks to our new stranger about something that I could not bother to concern myself with. After some time, the merriments, slowly as it may have been, seemed to die down. Most of the men diffused to their respective residences, not worrying themselves with the encroaching horrors the even had the potential to present.

            Most of the men, at this point, were asleep, and I knew the time was growing nye. Then, taking me almost by surprise, the beast burst through the gargantuan mead-hall door. It appeared as though the beast was toying with us. I noticed Beowulf watch Grendel as he took a table cloth, tied it around his impenetrable neck, and ate one of my kinsmen. The jovial manner in which this colossal carried out the cold-blooded murder of an innocent man confused and infuriated me. Fortunately for me, and quite unfortunately for the beast, the next person he tried to prey upon was Beowulf. I stood in horror, appreciation, and amazement as Beowulf twisted Grendel’s arm around in its socket. I knew the battle was not yet won, but I had faith in the man in which our fate was trusted in. Just then, Grendel fell to the ground, having slipped on a puddle of blood. This gave Beowulf the upper hand, and my expectations for the outcome of this night, cautiously of course, grew with each blow the Geat hurled at Grendel. There was some dialogue between the beast and his conqueror, but I paid no mind; as, battle was no time for conversation of any sort. Finally, after Beowulf threw his lesser around the hall in a quite ostentatious manner, he finally tore the hairy, evil arm from our torturer’s torso. The beast had finally realized his defeat, so, certain of his death, Grendel sulked out of our mead hall. Our misfortune had finally been eradicated. 

9 comments:

  1. Nat! I felt like I was reading this right out of Beowulf. You did so well with the vocab and such good imagery! I wish I could write like you. I love how the title is Eradication and the last word is eradicated. great job ;)

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  2. This is very well written! I love how you gave great details into how the thane was feeling right before Grendel would come to his final raid. I have to say it is one of the best pieces of creative writing I've read in a while.

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  3. I liked this since it was nicely written and it really felt as if this could've been apart of the actual book as a sort of a side story or side note.

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  4. This was somewhat interestingly interesting.

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  5. I liked the sense of fearful anticipation in the first half and the detail of the attack in the second half. Nicely done.

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